5- Claudia’s letter back
The little blue dot on
Mona’s laptop blinked at her the moment she stumbled into her hotel room She threw her keys and jacket off but left
the light switch alone, preferring the partial dark. It could give her time to
process all she had just seen. Or imagined. Blinding light would be too much.
But that blue blinking
light beckoned her to the computer.
The surrealism of the
night clung to her.
If she connected to the
speedy, gritty, garish digital world then she would know for sure she was
losing her mind. Finally. After all these years and all the absurdities she had
encountered.
Yet skipping the
opportunity to read a letter from Claudia was not in her favor. Nor did
crashing into deep R.E.M. sleep seem like a particularly fine idea.
The lid of the laptop
lifted to illuminate the room.
“YOU’VE GOT MAIL!”
She nearly jumped out of
her skin. Claudia had replied to her email about the painted pond and its mystique.
“Hello,” the email began. Mona was hoping to find an objective opinion that
would explain it away.
“What if locals paint the pond each year and the police figured that out
by now and, what with the tragedy of those missing children, do not stand in
the way of the town’s way of coping. Sure, the oil paint is bad for the water.
But acrylic might not work so well because it dries fast and water color would
be asinine on ice. In fact, I don’t see how painting ice is a good idea
at all. How much is it? It must be layers upon layers of the stuff!
What are you up to? Are you feeling less blue up there? I know
it’s cold. I honestly don’t know how northerners can handle it. Have any hot
chocolate with mushrooms. Make it really hot. So hot it burns your mouth. Maybe
I shall have empathy burns with you.:3 “
She had no time to
collect her thoughts. Mona typed a stream-of-conscious response then and there
before the shock of the night could render her wordless.
“Claudia, something weird has happened. I don’t just mean unusual
or bizarre. I mean weird like I haven’t seen in a long time. Not since you were
out in the coma. But somehow that was explicable. You know what I mean? There
was a reason to the rhyme. This, this is the kind of thing you read about or
hear about on the talk shows where people report alien abductions. Which is
going to leave me to ask you...am I crazy?”
She hammered out the
event that had occurred a half hour ago at the pond. All that she could
remember. In no particular order. By the time the event was typed and sent, her
forehead nearly collided with the keyboard.
Deep, deep in sleep.
Dreaming about art.
About painting the pond
while naked.
Her hair being used as a brush.
There is a crowd and
people are repeating some elusive ingredient to melting ice.
Salt. Salt poured on ice
cubes. Sully had told her once that salt in a hollow wand waved over ice makes
a street magician look like he’s melting it. But it’s a silly trick.
“You’ve got mail…” a
child whispered.
Mona’s eyes fluttered
open. Her laptop was still on and the screen dark. But the sound of her
mail-service had alerted her. She touched the finger to the sensor and
discovered another message from Claudia. She must be wide awake in Louisiana.
“Why didn’t you dance with him?” her message inquired. “Were
you afraid or was it just because you didn’t know how to ice skate that well?
Do you get a menacing air from him? Be careful but maybe Aubrey and Sully could
help you figure this out. Don’t do anything that doesn’t feel safe but...I
don’t know, Mona. That is weird. Why would he appear doing that on that
particular pond. (PS- I realize I sound like a loony, assuming he’s not
an ordinary man. He probably is someone who lost a kid and ice-skates there to cope.
Maybe? Maybe call the police? Take a deep breath. Try to relax. And you
asked if you’re crazy. Remember what my psych said? Crazy people don’t ask if
they’re crazy.”
Claudia must not know
how sane she sounded in Mona’s moment of puzzlement. Her next action was to instant
message Aubrey on his much hated Skype. He was always complaining about
uninstalling it and yet there he was whenever anyone needed to get in touch
with him.
MonaPizza: Aubrey!
Aub: Oh dear. Who died?
MonaPizza: That isn’t
funny. Listen, I saw something weird at that pond. Weirder than the paint.
Aub: And what was that,
my gourmet paranoid?
MonaPizza: I think it
was a ghost. But I’m not sure.
There was a long pause
in between his next message.
Aub: Listen. I’ve read
that taking too much xanax can do things to someone’s mind.
MonaPizza: This isn’t a
joke. I saw a man there. Figure skating.
Aub: My oh my.
MonaPizza: You think I’m
high?
Aub: At least higher
than me. Was he any good?
MonaPizza: He was
amazing. Do you know if Sully is done with her concert?
Aub: Yes and probably
fainted by now. Concerts like that drain a diva, you know?
MonaPizza: We have to
tell her about this. She’ll give me the benefit of a doubt.
Aub: I wonder if those
benefits include not laughing.
MonaPizza: Message her.
She’ll want to get out of that hotel with the back-up dancers. I’ll meet
you both by the pond.
Aub: Why do I have to
message her?
MonaPizza: Aubrey,
you’re a writer! You came here for experience! To absorb the atmosphere! Get
like a sponge and do it!
Aub: If you insist.
MonaPizza: See you both
in a while.
Aub: Mona?
MonaPizza: Yes?
Aub: Bring pepper spray.
.
That won a smile. Nice
to remember that under the snark he did care about her.
6- a dance
Sully’s high timbre
carried in the air. Snowflakes had begun to fall by the time Mona found her
friends. The tall figure of Aubrey leaned against a tree and Sully seated
nearby, playing in the snow. She was singing that creepy Alvin & the
Chipmonks Christmas song.
Mona bit her lip as she
appeared before them. “You two are great friends.”
“Yes, well, humoring
friends’ paranoid delusions comes with the package. That it does have its
limits.” Aubrey stretched while Sully scrambled to her feet.
“So what’s all this
fuss?” she asked. “I should be resting it.”
“Come on,” Mona took Sully’s hand and led them
to the pond.
The moonlight was still
spilling across the ice’s surface, casting the painted mural of the swans and
geese in an ethereal wash. “...there’s more. Someone painted more while I was
gone.”
Her friends were silent.
There was no arguing that. The mural had grown since last they saw it.
“I’m stumped…” Sully
squeaked.
“Are those…” Mona turned
her scrutiny to Sully “--skates? Did you bring rollerblades?”
“Sure. Why not? Maybe I
can one-up him.”
“The circus is always in
town around you people…” Aubrey held up a hand. “Wait a moment…”
He squinted and bared
his teeth. That was a usual sign of heavy thinking. Mona traced his gaze.
The stranger had
returned. It was evident that Sully and Aubrey could see him.
He glided forward, black
silhouette shining in the moonlight. He flew through a few figures and landed
before them, arm outstretched to them.
All Mona could do was
take in breath after breath of winter air. Beside her Aubrey was reticent,
almost respectful in his silence. But Sully was walking forward.
“Sully!” Mona made a
grab for her but she had ducked. She tied her skates on without explanation or
apology. Meanwhile, the man waited for her, arm outstretched with the patience
of a trained dancer. Mona pursued her friend. When she reached the smaller
woman she saw that Sully’s eyes seemed to look through her. She was utterly
absorbed in the stranger.
Sully’s petite frame
joined the man’s in the moonlight. She took his hand and he positioned them.
“Sully…” Mona blurted.
When the dance couple
shifted even slightly, Mona went to lunge forward. Aubrey’s arm stopped her.
“She’ll...she’ll be hurt…”
Why did her own voice
sound so distant?
Sully and the masked man
began their dance. They glided in Os and 8s. He spun her and she flipped, but
always landed just in time to balance herself. Sully was like a feather, and
then like a bird. He was support, holding her up, catching her before she fell,
then he was the wind beneath her wings. He tossed her, caught her, spun her,
threw her and balanced her.
Their dance swelled in
danger and aggression.
Mona pulled free of
Aubrey and ran for them. But her male friend stopped her again. “Let it go. Let
them go.”
“They’ll drown if it
cracks!”
Now Sully was being held
high in the air, flapping her arms in grace. The shadow of a larger bird held
the smaller one as it flapped its wings. Learning to fly.
At last the two dancers
stopped, hand-in-hand. With a final bow. The masked stranger leaned in,
whispered something in Sully’s ear. If only Mona could hear it from here. He
spun around and skated in the direction of the darkest shadows that night.
Right at Sully’s feet the ice began to crack. Steam was rising. The young
dancer shook her head and the haze of the moment passed.
“OH SHIT!” she yelled.
The beauty of the scene also shattered. The
pond was defrosting by the second. She bolted towards the shore with the ice
cracking and gaping behind her.
This time Aubrey did not
hold Mon back as she shot out and clasped Sully’s arms. She pulled the smaller
woman onto the snowy shore.
The three friends gazed
out at the rising steam from the melting pond.
The imprint of the
painting floated atop the water. But now it was all too much. Mona took both
friends’ hands and ran from the pond.
“Sully, what the hell
got into you?”
“I don’t know, I lost
control!”
When Mona looked back to
the rising mist she thought she saw eyes in them. Several of them, several
faces, but none of them frowning.
7- the memorial
“I’m not sure. Geese
just don’t make for intriguing beasts,” Aubrey was arguing with Sully again.
The following day, with
the sun out and civilian volunteers at the pond, Mona could hardly recognize
the setting. The pond was icy but not frozen over. The oil paint was being
worked out by the volunteers. Mona leaned against a tree as she watched.
“The shark in Jaws wasn’t a great white. They changed
it to one for the movie. You could do that with the geese. Make them swans or
something more poetic,” Sully carried on\. She seemed untouched by the events
of last night. Aside from excessive yawning and dark circles under her eyes,
she was her usual post-concert self.
“I wonder where he
went…” Mona thought aloud.
“Wherever phantoms go
when their haunting ends,” Aubrey suggested.
“What about a
non-supernatural explanation?” she asked.
“He got over his little
brother’s disappearance, is cured of his psychosis and will live a fruitful and
healthy life,” Aubrey droned.
“What does it matter?”
was Sully’s characteristic response.
Mona had written her own
theories to Claudia earlier that day.
“In that moment,
watching Sully skate on thin ice with a masked stranger, I wasn’t only me
anymore. I was their parents. Their guardians. My heart was torn between my
body and the body of my loved one. Even Aubrey played a part. He held me back. I
ached so much during that dance. I watched a child leave my protection, spread her
wings and attempt to fly. That is a horror I’ve never encountered before. I am
not a parent. I was in that moment. I know it makes no sense. But as Sully
would say “God is Absurdity.” When I let them finish the dance, steam began to
form and the pond broke open.”
“Hey, Sully…” Mona
asked.
“Hm?” She looked at her.
“I won’t ask any more questions about it until you're ready. But one more for
now.”
“Sure, shoot.” She swept
her short hair behind her ear.
“What did he whisper to
you?”
Sully’s green eyes
focused elsewhere. “I’ll tell you soon. Not now.”
Mona nodded. She had not
expected a straight answer. This was all too surreal to sort right away. She
wandered over to the goose memorial. The mother goose with her head turned
upward as she called for her goslings. But what was this? Another goose head
was sticking out from the snow. Mona dusted the snow off with a gentle hand.
They were all there. Six
little geese. Her goslings were there, buried out of sight.
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